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Monday 3 August 2020

Last week.

W.A.L.T upload our last weeks writing.


Last week we had to write about a elephant and a screaming baby we had to write a descriptive sentence
we use verbs and more stuff. I chose the baby because i new that i could use my imagination.
so we sat down and  got to writing. So when were finish we got free time.
What i could improve on is my writing i could do more.
and what i am good at is editing my work.

3 comments:

  1. wow thats amazing you have done a good job at discribing your task. And gess what i did the baby as well gooood job.

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  2. dash like your blog post try to add more juicy words
    🙂

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  3. Hello Dash it's Danny Hobbs from kaingaroa school good work on your blog post as you know that I did this to. Any way good job.

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